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Posted: **Sun Sep 28, 2003 5:33 am**

constructive one that is...
appreciated.

http://www.pbase.com/3kobalt

Posted: **Sun Sep 28, 2003 2:09 pm**

This is just a small suggestion.....Your gallery titles....instead of:
"gallery hall".....just use the title "hall". The series of images within the gallery are very narrative...kinda like reading an interesting short story. A single word title makes them poetic!

Posted: **Sun Sep 28, 2003 2:19 pm**

How do u want to improve your skill/

Posted: **Mon Sep 29, 2003 5:23 pm**

The shot of the child running out of the fog at us at http://www.pbase.com/image/21776334, is by far your strongest image. I left a comment on why I think it represents your best work to date. If you can build the same strong contrasts and substantive meaning into your future work, 3kobalt, you will become a consistently expressive photographer. Good luck,
Phil

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at least i was trying, any feedback please?

at least i was trying, any feedback please?