at least i was trying, any feedback please?

[3kobalt]

constructive one that is...
appreciated.

http://www.pbase.com/3kobalt

[baileyzim]

This is just a small suggestion.....Your gallery titles....instead of:
"gallery hall".....just use the title "hall". The series of images within the gallery are very narrative...kinda like reading an interesting short story. A single word title makes them poetic!

[gundamz]

How do u want to improve your skill/

[pnd1]

The shot of the child running out of the fog at us at http://www.pbase.com/image/21776334, is by far your strongest image. I left a comment on why I think it represents your best work to date. If you can build the same strong contrasts and substantive meaning into your future work, 3kobalt, you will become a consistently expressive photographer. Good luck,
Phil