Comments and tips please

[yardbird]

Hey all,
I was experimenting with some black and white photos. I did this in the night, with flash set to high, and also had enough light in the inside. Switched on enough bulbs just to light up the inside, keeping the outside dark.
What do you think? comments and tips most wanted.
http://www.pbase.com/image/22876501
Thanks
Karthik

[oanrai]

Tried your link Yardbird but doesn't work. Got the message "Bad Image Reference"

[shecodes]

Tried your link Yardbird but doesn't work. Got the message "Bad Image Reference"

Maybe here?

http://www.pbase.com/yardbird/black_and_white