ehreng wrote:.... How's the first attempt? (I'm not sure about the central photo)
http://upload.pbase.com/image/74869358
Congratulation on your first attempt! As you can see here, we are all the beginners in this form of photography and we all need help to improve.
I can make couple of suggestions, assuming that your tryptich purpose is to show the calm beauty of sand dunes and surrounding nature.
- first, I would make sure that all photos have the same color cast. For example, change the color cast of the first photo to match the third one. First one has a touch of red in it and on the third one dominates blue. With the same color cast, they express unity.
- second, I would use a different subject matter for the middle photo. It dominates the tryptich with such a strong contrast between white piece of wood and the dark shadow. Eye is constantly drawn to the center, breaking the relaxing mood that first and last photo creates. With that said, if your intent was to create "visual friction", and to off-balance the tranquility expressed on the side photos, I would leave it.
- lastly, I would play with different background colors and see which one is best for the desired mood.
Hope this helps. Note that this is just a personal preference, at the end you should really trust your visual instincts.