critique this pic

[llrain73]

this was my first "pay attention to what I am doing" try at night time photos
ive randomly snapped some but this was where I actually played
with what I was doing....How does it look?

I am a just above newbie photographer who is learning alot day
after day.

http://www.pbase.com/llrain73/image/92622758

original:
http://www.pbase.com/llrain73/image/92623371

[mikeangstadt]

That's a good photo! Nighttime, river-side scenes always make for good shots. Can't say I notice the difference between the edited and original photos though.

[llrain73]

just the size..thats all

[louann108]

I like the original better.