despite my lack off knowledge
Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2004 9:41 ami tried to fabricate a website, you can vieuw this at: http://www.keezi.nl
have a nice day
have a nice day
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2004 9:41 amPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2004 9:57 pmYou have some really interesting pictures, but there is a bit too much animation on your web page. It is really distracting and takes away from the body of the page. Also, the english is a bit off. It is "galleries" not "gallery's."
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 8:00 pm"It is "galleries" not "gallery's." i don't think so
Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:53 pmkeezi wrote:"It is "galleries" not "gallery's." i don't think so
"Galleries" is indeed the correct plural of "gallery"; "gallery's" is the possessive, meaning "of gallery"...
"Book off guest" should be "guest book".
"Friendly" is misspelled ("i before e except after c" ie, "friendly" but "receipt") and the personal pronoun "I" should always be a capital letter in English.
I also agree on animation -- far too distracting.
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:47 amtnx i changed the misspelled words, 
book of guest, i leave it like that , i think it is possible despite evrybody writes it diff.
tnx for the trouble writing back
book of guest, i leave it like that , i think it is possible despite evrybody writes it diff.
tnx for the trouble writing back
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:48 pmkeezi wrote:tnx i changed the misspelled words,
tnx for the trouble writing back
Sorry but "book of guest" is incorrect -- it implies that the guest owns the book. "Guest book" is correct. And you still have "Gallery's" instead of "Galleries"...
Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:55 amit is theirs so that makes it ok i guess.