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keezi
 
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despite my lack off knowledge

Post Sun Apr 04, 2004 9:41 am


i tried to fabricate a website, you can vieuw this at: http://www.keezi.nl
have a nice day

octi
 
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Post Sun Apr 04, 2004 9:57 pm


You have some really interesting pictures, but there is a bit too much animation on your web page. It is really distracting and takes away from the body of the page. Also, the english is a bit off. It is "galleries" not "gallery's."

keezi
 
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Post Tue Apr 06, 2004 8:00 pm


"It is "galleries" not "gallery's." i don't think so

ukexpat
 
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Post Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:53 pm


keezi wrote:"It is "galleries" not "gallery's." i don't think so


"Galleries" is indeed the correct plural of "gallery"; "gallery's" is the possessive, meaning "of gallery"...

"Book off guest" should be "guest book".

"Friendly" is misspelled ("i before e except after c" ie, "friendly" but "receipt") and the personal pronoun "I" should always be a capital letter in English.

I also agree on animation -- far too distracting.

keezi
 
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Post Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:47 am


tnx i changed the misspelled words, :oops: book of guest, i leave it like that , i think it is possible despite evrybody writes it diff.
tnx for the trouble writing back

ukexpat
 
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Post Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:48 pm


keezi wrote:tnx i changed the misspelled words, :oops: book of guest, i leave it like that , i think it is possible despite evrybody writes it diff.
tnx for the trouble writing back


Sorry but "book of guest" is incorrect -- it implies that the guest owns the book. "Guest book" is correct. And you still have "Gallery's" instead of "Galleries"...

keezi
 
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Post Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:55 am


it is theirs so that makes it ok i guess.


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