Newbie here needs some of your opinions :)

[djarvik]

Hi, there!

http://www.pbase.com/djarvik


I'm new to this place and photography itself.

Please check out my gallery and let me know what you think.


thanx!

Alon

[pstewart]

Hi, Alon, and welcome! Some really nice photos there...good lighting and color. My only suggestion would be to have some models smile, since the moody sultry look gets boring if that's all there is. I think it's harder to get a good smile shot than a "stone" face look, don't you? So that's more of a challenge anyway, in my opinion.

Nice work, though, and I look forward to seeing more.
Phyllis

[djarvik]

I'm new here and really need some of your "critique" , actually I'm new to photography itself and trying to learn somethings.



anyone???